Mostly the sizing is accurate however this was not always the case capturing the curb or line of an object I think this is most noticeable on the vars type object.
Do the shapes between the objects look correct?
Except for the cases were the shaping of an object was incorrect the spacings were fine and I did start to find that looking at the negative space made capturing a composition easier.
Do the objects in your drawings look solid?
I've found that my picture that uses colour gives a more solid appearance possibly due to the objects no longer being transparent. Possibly also because of strong brand identification, such as red and Coca cola so there is a connection made to a genuine solid object that is seen day in day out. Rather than a portrail of a 2ler bottle shaped object.
Have you managed to create the feeling of depth in your drawing?
Using the coloured peace as an example again. I think there is a defiant sense of depth partly due to the sardine can being right at the front of the composition and the cirial box being right at the back a good 18inchs away. I think it would of been easier to create a feeling of depth in the other pieces if they had any use of tone.
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